Our Lord and Me Compared

I love our lord

I always loved him,

But times get rough and

Prayers could work.

When it doesn't just keep trying,

He'll be there with you even at the time

he was dying,He gave his life for sins

Just like I did, I gave my happiness

for your sadness.I suffer just to be with you

When you cry that means I have to watch over you,

and you will always be in my heart no matter what 

the causes. If I cry with you I let you know your not the

only one that feels the pain.

So I give you my happiness and make you smile again.

I love our lord Jesus. He is our savior

and he gave us a chance to see heavens gate keeper.

By: Christian Manzanares

Reason: I believed in this God and our savior.

Until When?

My Life is a mess

although many think I'm blessed

Maybe not all, of course

But they say it's because of this and that

I tried to be as good as I could be

But I guess I havent tried hard enough

I fake a smile and try to look happy

Sick of all the spoil and the bluff

What else do I need to do,

to turn my life's clouds back blue

I lay on the floor and stare at the ceiling

My heart is aching; the silence is deafening

I've put up with so much

my friends- I've been too dependent on them

I've forgotten how to walk without a crouch

and every day is just a cycle-they're all the same

I'm tired of crying

but at the same time I still cry

fantasies are so much deceiving

the reason for all these, I still ask why...

By: Yunic Anne

My Deaths Rest

I slept calm with no sense of the up coming dawn,

Nights were never my light to see the skies shapes.

the moon was white and have a luminous glow that made me think of the cold hands I have to hold.

My death is near to the beginning of the end so close just so close to my awakening moment.

But I couldn't open my eyes to the light I was yet still blind,

I was left to die in this bed alone,

I tried to call someone I love but never picked up the phone...

I die asleep at home...

Now you know how is it like to die alone,

with no one to say good bye.


By Chrstian Manzanares.

My Untitled Poem

My Sleep went well,

Waking up to the sun

when stars disappear to the other world.

Twirling through the past when death

promise that this will be my last,

My last to say I love you ,and my last

to say good-bye.

I love the world and it's children,

I love you and your warm touch, and

nothing can't stop me from missing you this much.

I never get tired of every conversation we have, and

I remember every moment that led you to cry on my shoulders

when ever I tell you about my past.

Forgive me for my actions and please don't make this a quick reaction,

I am fine now, no blood as not been shed, and no tears has been drained

you are the reason that saved me...

This is my untitled poem... my feelings has been printed on paper so 

always remember that I am part savior.

By: Christian Manzanares

Reason: Thoughtful not thoughtless

April 7, 2010

(My Improved poems)