My Untitled Poem

My Sleep went well,

Waking up to the sun

when stars disappear to the other world.

Twirling through the past when death

promise that this will be my last,

My last to say I love you ,and my last

to say good-bye.

I love the world and it's children,

I love you and your warm touch, and

nothing can't stop me from missing you this much.

I never get tired of every conversation we have, and

I remember every moment that led you to cry on my shoulders

when ever I tell you about my past.

Forgive me for my actions and please don't make this a quick reaction,

I am fine now, no blood as not been shed, and no tears has been drained

you are the reason that saved me...

This is my untitled poem... my feelings has been printed on paper so 

always remember that I am part savior.

By: Christian Manzanares

Reason: Thoughtful not thoughtless

April 7, 2010

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